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Thesis statement: CCT Aztec & Incan civilizations.

thats the prompt.. i need to incorportate it using the AP World rubric that goes like "when comparing this to this between this and this using this factor etc etc"

can anyone who has taken the AP World Class develop a good thesis statement with good description and factors comparing the Aztec and Inca Civilizations

You might say something like:

"Although they resided in separate areas of the hemisphere, spoke different languages, and used different ways of record-keeping, the Aztecs and the Inca were two branches off the same Native American tree, based on corn civilization, astronomy, and collectivism."

If you read my 2nd last question, you would have noticed that I made a few changes to my statement over here. As much as you comment, please RATE my P.S from 1 to 10

"Science is a subject that I have always been fascinated about, I would like to apply for the Electrical and Electronic Engineering course. Physics and Mathematics are my best subjects; they both play a big role in the course and would be useful to me, as I am able to solve mathematics equations. Also the idea of creating electronic objects like robots, video-game consoles and accessories, large machines and phones really appeals me. Science related studies have been around my family for ages-my father and some of my uncles studied engineering, my maternal grand father studied architecture and my mother has a PhD in medical Science.
Currently, I am attending Barnet College and I am studying BTEC National in Applied Science (I really enjoy the practical side of the course) and GCSE English (retake) with the aim of getting at least an MM Grade (160 UCAS Tariff Points) in the BTEC and a C Grade in the GCSE, respectively. I decided to do both courses because of the inspiration of my recent GCSE achievements; also I knew that participating in the course would make me successful in any science course, like electronics or electrical engineering.
I have some work experience; for example I worked outside the country, in a cybercafe for a month. As a Ticket Clerk, I was responsible for selling out tickets for time limits at which costumers could use the computers as well as helping them out in using the computers, for instance I assisted an elderly man in using his e-mail account. and that lead me to having skills useful to me in the course. I have some computer skills which include knowledge on how to use the Microsoft Office and the internet therefore giving me the ability to do course work with a computer. With other skills like being able to manage my time, I can ensure that I will always be punctual during learning hours, plus my literacy and communication skills can help me in confidently working alongside with lecturers and other students to make better achievements. As well as communication skills, team work is also important when working with fellow students; I am a good team player therefore, that is not a problem for me.
In terms of leisure, I enjoy playing video-games, especially console games- my best genres are football, racing, fighting & adventure, sometimes I have daydreams of making my own video game which brings me back to the reason why I was destined for this course. My best movie genres are action, sci-fi, comedy and at times horror; comic book hero movies like Iron man amaze me. I liked the main character of the movie; Tony Stark, he’s the one I almost wanted to be like- wealthy, confident and he was also into Electronic Engineering, which is why he was able to make his Iron man suit and become a hero.
I enjoy watching football-my favourite club is Arsenal and my favourite national team is Nigeria. My most memorable Arsenal player is Thierry Henry; he earned a record as the highest goal scorer in Arsenal through out the team history, second to Ian Wright and he was one of the players that helped Arsenal to qualify for a UEFA champions’ league Final. I enjoy listening to music; almost any kind of music grabs my attention, even soundtracks from movies and video games, but my best music genre is Rhythm and Bass.
Furthermore, I look forward to the experience, challenges and achievements of higher education. As I have explained, I consider that I have the necessary interest skills and motivation to apply for electronic and electrical engineering. After the degrees, I would like to work in an engineering industry, build machinery for the government or participate in research for new devices. By taking part in this course, I would be fulfilling my career path."

As a very critical University student I have to give this a 2.

I don’t know what University’s your applying for and I won’t write your ps out again (as It already been done) but I will give you comments.

Firstly don’t have words such as "some" in I have ’some’ work experience. Don’t use words that show a lack of what you have. Just say I have work experience and let them be the judge of how much there is.

You also have a grammar mistakes. Phones really appeals TO me. There also a few other mistakes. Just get someone to look over it with it printed out so they can underline all the little mishaps! It’s not a problem. I had a few.. But it does not hurt to have it perfect!

You do not need to list how many UCAS points it is, you can if you think the University admissions teams are idiots, but they should know.

The paragraph on football is not useful to why you want to go to University. I mean If Thierry was applying then maybe, but no. Just say you enjoy football as a sport, watching and playing and say how you will get involved in the University this way.

Your paragraph on leisure is limited. This is your weakest part of your personal statement. It hinders you rather than help. I would word it somewhat like this.

Within my spare time, I enjoy interactive games, specialising in console formats. My favoured genera’s include sports, racing, fighting and adventure based. Moreover my passion for gaming is not limited to just consuming. My goal is to take part in the production of a title, which drives me to the pursuit of Electronic Eng.
I also have an interest in film industry, favouring such genera’s from action to comedy. My favourite however would have to be comic book based movies, such as Iron man.

Something like this. It’s not perfect but please if you do anything don’t say you want to be Iron man. It makes you sound that you are not mature for the course.

Also a question I would ask if I was in admissions is. Why this course? If you want to do computer games. Why not do computer sciences what is based more on software rather than eng. Which is more on the physical side.

When you write off doubtful accounts, how does it affect your income statements, balance sheets, and statements of cash flows?
This is just a general question. The assignment gave numbers and such, but the information was so limited. I really like your answer. I’m still confused on why it is that way though.

Answer:

When using the allowance method:
No effect on income statement
No effect on balance sheet
No effect on statement of cash flows

When using the direct - write off method:
Income statement: Expenses will increase (net income will decrease)
Balance sheet: Total assets will decrease
No effect on statement of cash flows

Or Just christian?
Judaism maintains that the righteous of all nations have a place in the world to come.

Since Jesus was the Jewish Messiah yes. God will judge everyone by his standards not by ours. Basically there are two kinds of Jews. Messianic Jews and Non Messianic Jews.

Some Non Messianic Jews insist in defining Messianic Judaism as a form of Christianity. They also tell you that only Jews get to decide who Jews are. In the same breath they tell you who Christians are. In this way they get to define Christianity yet and at the same time Christians don’t have a right to decide who Christians are.

Non Jews don’t believe that Messianic Jews are necessarily Christians. People calling themselves Messianic Jews are as diverse in beliefs and practices as Non Messianic Jews or even Christians, so it’s hard to pin down universal beliefs that some here insist that they have.

A person becomes a Jew by being born of a Jewish mother or converting to Judaism. Once a person is a Jew they are always a Jew.

There is one exception for some people belief that Jesus is the Messiah. Jews will tell you that Messianic Jews have joined another religion and that they stop being Jews at the moment of joining.

At the same time you have Jews practicing Paganism (Jewitch), becoming Buddhists (Jewbu) and joining the Unitarian Church and they will say that they are still Jews. Yet you will never see any complaints about that. (please google these terms and see for yourself.)

All of these religions have a very different understanding of who God is but they will tell you that belief in Jesus invalidate a persons Jewishness because they have a different understanding of who God is.

They will accept the Pagan Buddhist and Unitarian influences on Jewish practice but not from Jesus. Some will even admit that Jesus just taught traditional Judaism but wasn’t anything special even though he taught others that he was the Messiah.

Jews will admit that Christianity started out as a sect of Judaism and that Jesus and all the apostles were Jews. They will also tell you that Jews that are trying to live that life are not Jews. So you know that all the rules are being bent for this one group. It’s just a matter of prejudice.

Someone asked a question about worshiping the Fire God Ferris. The focus of the question was" …would you PERSONALLY feel comfortable welcoming me not just as a fellow congregant at your Synagogue, but as a member of the Tribe?" (so he was clearly asking about converting to Judaism).

The response was "Reform Judaism covers a wide swath of beliefs and practices and I am sure you will be wholly accepted. … I personally would accept you whole heartily as a fellow Jew."

http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;_ylt=AhExSQsqkV3.ucRgc.9l7Cvty6IX;_ylv=3?qid=20080925130239AAcb5lf&show=7#profile-info-f522078ffdf8786fcab6f8023c6befbdaa

Some Jews can go around proclaiming that a hybridization of Judaism and Paganism is OK but belief that Yeshua is the Messiah is not.

As one person said "we’ve become one big new religion."

Messianics only wish to be treated as fellow human beings. They don’t insist that people accept, agree with them, convert to their beliefs. To habitually insult them and pervert their beliefs is intolerance. They have a right to exist and follow their hearts.

Jews remain Jews because covenant relationships are not like a regular contract. Covenants remain binding regardless of a failure of one party. If this were not the case all of the Israelites would have been destroyed a long time ago. This is clearly illustrated in the Tanakh.

Everybody even many Christians are jealous of their Messianic fervor.

I am applying to the UC system right now, doing my personal statements. They say that both personal statements should be 1,000 words together (cumulatively), they say also however that a little over, 1012 words for example (this is their literal example), is fine. I just finished and I have 1038 words, will that be ok? Or should i try to restructure the essays and lower it?

You can probably get a way with 1,025 words or less. Use contractions to shorten your personal statement.

Good luck!